Carminis Pastorali # 002: IN THE SHINING GRACE

Structure of stanzas: 5-3-2-2

Rhymes: ABABA CBC DE ED

Rejoice in the shining grace

In intrepid desire to work in total

Although I want no boredom or trace

My strength in mere subtotal

Distorting in medium tones embrace.

He deeply longs, to give us

Want to warm the prose in aureal

In donations less or plus.

What could I remove the taint of spoiling

Cloudy pain without any misfortune

And no damn statement in fortune

But being happy, at last, the cue giving.

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Carminis Pastoral – is a poetic modality that integrates the Esmeraldinus Verses, created by the Poet João Bosco Rolim Esmeraldo

Structure of stanzas: 5-3-2-2

Rhymes: ABABA CBC DE ED

The metric is defined in the first verse and must be maintained until the end of the poem;

Phrasal accent is free, but must take care of prosody and avoid the cacophony and the syllable.

The idea must go developing from the fisrt verse and growing until at the end, the last verse should be the strongest and has the burden of closing the poem with a golden key.

Cathryn Hughes 07/11/2011 - 15:00 (Via Facebook)

Nice poem Bosco!

Alelos Esmeraldinus
Enviado por Alelos Esmeraldinus em 07/11/2011
Reeditado em 26/12/2012
Código do texto: T3321466
Classificação de conteúdo: seguro
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